Red tailed hawks nesting:
the female falters, struggles to collect
live branches at the tops of trees,
as the male works on the nest.
She moves to a low branch
to pounce on a rabbit,
which escapes! We marvel
as she flies low over us.
We hear her call to her mate,
and they soar in circles together,
high above.
After a successful hunt,
prey feathers are found in a circular
pattern on the ground,
called a "fairy ring."
In Concord, hundreds of geese
fly in small skeins across a flat field,
against a backdrop of lavender,
just at sunset.
Nearby, a boggy area's
frozen patches shimmer silver,
black, and pewter.
Deeper water reflects bare trees
at the edge.
A rare cloud halo,
created by ice crystals,
shines, iridescent,
over the river,
colors scintillating,
Valentine's night,
all is quiet, as
Venus, the goddess of love,
stays close to
the nascent crescent moon.
A great blue heron
takes off from a naked branch,
flies low over the river,
flapping large wings,
legs trailing.
A cardinal on my apple tree,
brilliant red on an overcast day,
looks at me through the window,
on day one of the
Cornell backyard bird count.
At dusk there is a chill,
the moon shining into
the moon roof, as
reflections of the Watch Factory
in the still river enchant.
Two swans at twilight
look pale and angelic,
as doves coo, and a mockingbird
on a small nest tree
puffs up against the cold.
Erratic weather goes
from icy to warm.
City lights on a misty night
create a scene from a fable.
A bevy of arctic mergansers
frolic and dabble to feed
in the cove, splashing white spume.
Red breasted nuthatches glow,
travel downward on trunks,
and on undersides of branches,
like avian acrobats.
A lone kildeer,
an early migrant,
is lethargic, then active
as a dreaded chill descends.
A swift bald eagle flaps
vigorous wings
over the water at dusk,
to roost for the night.
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This this this is definitely,simply put, one of your best and finest work yet,the simplicity of the poetry; exquisitely worded, describing nature in a fairy tale reality is exquisitely stunning and impressive as always. Love love;a winner in my book as always. You keep getting better if that’s possible. Please keep writing!!!!
I love the moon shining through the trees! This morning the swans were flying around in circles over the river. No stopping those birds from doing their thing!
Thanks for putting it all together in this lovely poem
I really enjoyed your depiction of atmospheric effects on the river and bog, creating a fairy-tale view of nature, as in an impressionist painting. Thank you, Elsa!
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This this this is definitely,simply put, one of your best and finest work yet,the simplicity of the poetry; exquisitely worded, describing nature in a fairy tale reality is exquisitely stunning and impressive as always. Love love;a winner in my book as always. You keep getting better if that’s possible. Please keep writing!!!!
So many birds and swans soon will have cygnets…love having the river Charles near the house and on my daily commute. We are lucky!
I love the moon shining through the trees! This morning the swans were flying around in circles over the river. No stopping those birds from doing their thing!
Thanks for putting it all together in this lovely poem
Beautiful poetry bringing nature to life.
Elsa brings every bird to life like only she can. Wonderfully written!
Stunning poetry weaving together all the forces of nature as only Elsa can!
I really enjoyed your depiction of atmospheric effects on the river and bog, creating a fairy-tale view of nature, as in an impressionist painting. Thank you, Elsa!
Your observance of nature and corresponding skill of conveying it to us is awesome.
This gave me pause, I listened, I was enchanted. Lovely verse.